Hi team,
Updated 28 September. The cancelled emails changed (rows below), the renewal emails move up so design them with the failed-payment emails, and the words for the cancelled and Trustpilot emails are now final.
We're rebuilding every Hypertune email from scratch, and I need you to design them. The words are written. The goal is conversions: short, clear, and the one button impossible to miss on a phone.
Start fresh. The current Klaviyo templates, the Figma email designs and the old flows are all flawed. Use them for reference only. Keep the Hypertune logo and brand colours, nothing else.
Three layouts, built as reusable Klaviyo templates:
Every email to design:
| Subject | Purpose | Layout | |
|---|---|---|---|
| Sign-up · 1 | Your account's ready | Get a new account to pick a plan | Action |
| Sign-up · 2 | Still thinking it over? | Explain what Hypertune does and the new CPU overclocking, so they buy | Action |
| Sign-up · 3 | Half off your first month | Remove the price objection with 50% off the first month | Action, with a coupon box |
| Sign-up, trial link · 1 | Your free week is waiting | Get them to start the trial they signed up for | Action |
| Sign-up, trial link · 2 | Your trial hasn't started yet | Remind them the trial hasn't started | Action |
| Trial · 1 | Two minutes to your first optimization | Get the app installed and optimized in the first hour | Action |
| Trial · 2 | How much FPS are you gaining? | Get them to optimize and see the gain in their own game | Action |
| Trial · 3 | Your trial ends on (date) | Say plainly when the trial ends and that the plan starts, so there's no surprise charge | Account notice, blue |
| Trial · 4 | Your first payment didn't go through | Get a working card on file after a failed first charge | Account notice, amber |
| Abandoned checkout · 1 | You didn't finish checkout | Bring them back to the checkout they left | Action, with an order summary |
| Abandoned checkout · 2 | Two questions people ask first | Answer "is it safe" and "will it work on my PC", then back to checkout | Action |
| After purchase | You're in. Start here | Welcome them: the setup tutorial, the FAQ, then the Discord | Action |
| Failed payment · 1 | Your payment didn't go through | Get the card updated before the next retry | Account notice, amber |
| Failed payment · 2 | Still can't take your payment | Second reminder | Account notice, amber |
| Failed payment · 3 | Action needed to keep your plan | Warn the plan will end | Account notice, amber |
| Failed payment · 4 | Action needed for your plan | Last chance to keep the plan | Account notice, red |
| Renewal · 1 | Your yearly plan renews on (date) | Heads-up 15 days before renewal; check the card | Account notice, blue |
| Renewal · 2 | Your yearly renewal is coming up | Reminder 3 days before | Account notice, blue |
| Win-back · 1 | You tried Hypertune a while back | Bring past trial users back with the CPU overclocking news and 50% off the first month | A: action · B: plain note |
| Trial cancellation flow · 1 | Your trial's cancelled | Same as win-back 1, for people who just cancelled a trial | A: action · B: plain note |
| Win-back · 2 | Easy to revert, if it isn't for you | Take away the risk: restore point, one-click undo | A: action · B: plain note |
| Win-back · 3 | Last note from me | A last, personal note | A: action · B: plain note |
| Cancelled, no performance or bug | A free month on us | One email for both: help and a free month to try again. Only the first line changes | Plain note, with a FREEMONTH coupon box |
| Cancelled, too expensive | Half off, if price was the reason | Win them back with 50% off next month | Plain note, with a GAMER coupon box |
| Cancelled, not using it enough | You only need to run it once | Show it doesn't need daily use, plus 50% off next month | Plain note, with the same GAMER coupon box |
| Cancelled, other | Your plan's cancelled | The door is open, plus 50% off next month | Plain note, with the same GAMER coupon box |
| Cancelled · 3 days before the plan ends | Your plan ends on (date) | Last nudge to keep the plan, with their code again if unused | Account notice, blue |
| Trustpilot review | A quick favour? | Get an honest review from a yearly customer 10 days in, or a monthly customer after their second payment | Plain note |
Cancelled and Trustpilot emails: words approved on 28 September. Design them after the first three mockups are approved. One coupon box design covers every coupon email.
Split tests: make two versions of the win-back and trial cancellation flow emails (A in the action layout, B as a plain note, same words and button), and of trial email 1.
Rules:
Links: Kamil posts every URL in one pinned message in the Slack channel, labelled by button. Use those, and ask him if a button has no link yet.
Please deliver: the three layouts as Klaviyo templates, then mockups of trial email 1, failed payment email 1 and the "too expensive" email for my approval, then the rest. The headline and visual for each email are in the design brief, and the full words are linked from the email plan.
Thanks,
Austin